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PR Fuel: Using Plain Language In Public Relations
Using plain language to communicate with journalists is not
considered bland, but effective. Whether your press campaign
targets community or business publications, it is unlikely
that reporters reviewing your press kit will be familiar
with your profession's terminology. Providing them with
information in everyday words is the surest way to get your
point across, significantly improving your chances for media
coverage.
"Unless it's a particular trade magazine, press releases
full of technical jargon and business acronyms are more
likely to be passed over by editors," says communications
consultant Danna Yuhas, president, Market Impact, a technology marketing and
public relations agency. "Your purpose is not to impress
them with big words but to clarify why your message is
important, and has news value."
Yuhas, a speaker at the upcoming Plain Language
International Conference (September 26-29) in Toronto, says
plain language communication keeps messages simple, but not
simplistic. It neither talks down to the reader, nor 'dumbs
down' content. It structures information logically, in
familiar terms. Doing so, she says, creates immediate
benefits for both the editor and publicist.
"When editors or producers understand your message the first
time they read your material, it reduces:
-- misquotes and factual misinterpretations;
-- telephone discussions to clarify content; and
-- their revision time (e.g. they will use your material 'as
is')."
Yuhas continued saying, "editors and producers appreciate
receiving concise content about your company, and will
welcome your story pitches in the future. Making their job
easier will ultimately lead to additional media coverage,
improving your company's long-term image and top-of-mind
presence."
Writing press materials in plain language requires planning.
Yuhas says the process begins by identifying:
1) the purpose of the message (e.g. What do you want to
achieve?);
2) the editorial audience;
3) the media's audience
-- What is their general knowledge and/or industry
expertise?
-- What background information do they require?
-- Why are they reading the publication or tuning into the
program? (e.g. What is their needs and interests?); and
-- How will they benefit from reading or hearing your story?
"The message must bring value to the audience to achieve
desired results," she says. "Readers should be able to
quickly understand the key messages, and explain content to
others."
Break down complex concepts into manageable parts. Use short
sentences that each communicate one idea. Remove words that
do not improve understanding. Keep paragraphs to three or
four sentences. This will keep comments in context, avoiding
misquotes.
Use definition, help, or side-box resources ('sidebars') to
complement the main text. These will provide necessary
background information, without interrupting your message.
Avoid exclusive language - extraordinary wording or terms
only a minority of readers will understand. "Popular phrases
like 'leading edge technology,' or 'proactive approaches'
are vague, and open to interpretation," Yuhas says. "And
because they are overused, they fail to differentiate your
company."
Never make assumptions about the reader's knowledge. "It can
differ in social, geographic, and cultural contexts," she
says. "For example, is a 1-877 telephone number chargeable
or toll free? It is necessary to clarify."
Press material should not be an alphabet soup of acronyms.
Explain each term fully the first time it is used, followed
by its abbreviation. For example:
-- generally accepted accounting principles (GAAP)
-- initial public offering (IPO)
"Even 'PR' should be stated as 'public relations' the first
time it is used," she says.
Before sending your press kit to the media, have others read
your material for clarity. "Use their feedback to test the
message's effectiveness and efficiency, and ask them to
explain what they have just read. This will determine if
your message is clear, and if you have achieved your
communication objectives."
Plain language resources on the web:
Plain Language Association International (PLAIN):
http://www.plainlanguagenetwork.org
Plain Language International Conference:
http://www.plainlanguagenetwork.org/program2002.htm
Plain Language Action Network -- for U.S. government
employees http://www.plainlanguage.gov
Resources on wording and capitalization are available from
news-gathering organizations, such as the Associated Press
(AP) and the Canadian Press (CP). 'The Elements of Style' by
William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White summarizes the rules and
principles of composition, and the use of words and
expressions. A web version is viewable at:
http://www.bartleby.com/141/
Have questions for the author? Contact him at
abcom@ican.net
Adam Bello is a publicist and communications consultant in
Toronto, Ontario. His firm A. B. Communications & Associates
helps businesses develop long-term media strategy.
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